Reacount

 

Today in writing we were writing a recount about a moment in time i write about having mcdonalds.

It was easy using describing words and having rich language  in my writing and it was easy planning my story and writing my story about mcdonalds.

It was hard thinking about a moment in time to write about because there are so many moments in time to write about and it was hard to spell some words that i didn't know how to spell. 

Next time in writing i would try not to get distracted easily and try to finish my work on time and to try and add more paragraphs to my writing. 

fantasy creature

 

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 what i learned about  fantasy creatures is that it could have any power and it could be anything combined its all about your imagination. 

what i found easy was drawing my creature but i gave it all my best and it was easy  writing m plan about my creature and what kind of powers and what kind of weakness and  i found that really easy because it describe that really good and drawing my creature was fun and it turned out to look like a chunky big bird with a hat.

what i found it hard it wa shard writing my story of my creature because i had to use my imagination  and i had to think of it it wa shard writing and writing because it just gets boring but then i started to add more describing and more descriptive language so my  writing doesn't get boring.

what i enjoyed the most was writing because i liked making my own story up and i reckon i added heaps of rich and good words just maybe add more and i liked playing because it was interesting and because it was my best plan i have ever done.

Next time i do this i will add more detail to my writien a little bit and add more good rich language to my planing so it doesn't be boring so when people read it they go to sleep and add more  stuff on to my drawing.

Should you Be Prepared For A Natural Disaster

 

we Were learning about not all to be should be prepared for a natural disaster and i choose yes you should always be prepared.

I enjoyed adding describing and emotive words for my work and i enjoyed  recrafing and seeing  my master peace when it was done.

I Did Not enjoyed  because i had to make it a master peace and i didnt like  putting my writing on different slides.

Next time i will add more interesting words  and add more on my conclusion.

Sunflower

We were learning about sunflowers and how to personify  a sunflower and we were learning about sunflower poems.

I found it easy to write and describe my piece of writing and it was easy   to think of my writing  about sunflower and i liked describing my poem about sunflowers .

I found it hard to describe a sunflower because  its not a thing that I know about and I found hard because these not much describing words to describe the sunflower that I know of.

Next time i will add more rich describing words instead of boring words .

Colours in moari.

I found it hard to find the pictures of the monsters to match the colours.

I found it hard to know the maori word for the colours.

Next time i will make this slide about maori colours longer and explain it.

Twelve days of Christams.

we were learning about the twelve days of Christmas.

i enjoyed changing the backgrounds and i found it easy to write about the story.

i found it hard to think of the staff that we put in are slide  and to do the slide as a group.

Next time as a group we can not argue.

A moment in time.

 

We were learning about A moment in time.

I found it easy to describe whats happening  in the story and i found it easy to write the story about the hawk and the squirrel.

I found it hard to spell some words in my story and i found it hard to think about this story.

Next time i could  get some words corrected and next time i will make my story make more sense.

Fire Works

 

 we were learning about fire works and making poems about them.

I found it hard to some word rimming and i found it hard to think of letters that will make sense.

I found it easy to write a poem and i found it easy to find a background to match the fire works poem.

next time i could write another poem about fire works and make it more detailed.

 

persuasive writing

 

We were learning about persuasive writing

I found it easy to plan my persuasive wrting

I found it challenging to spell some words

Next time I will add more information.

Olympic pools

We were learning about doing a recount.

I found it easy to plan out my recount.

I found it challenging to write a recount and to remember the things on did at the Olympic pools.

Next time I will add some more information to my recount about the Olympic pools.

Writing the Awapuni School Fun Run

\We were learning about how to write a Personal Recount

I found it easy to plan my Personal Recount about the Awapuni School Fun Run

I found it challenging to how to Write my Personal Recount About The Fun Run

Next time I will add more Information to my Writing about the Awapuni School Fun Run.

matariki report slide

We were learning about Matariki reports

I found it easy writing my report and

I found it challenging to getting the information

Next time I will add more writing to my Matariki report

Chinese new year

We were learning about the Chinese new year

I found it easy to write information about the Chinese new year

I found it challenging getting the information for the Chinese new year

Next time I will add more writing to my report about a lunar new year or Chinese

my mythical creature.

We were learning about voice text    an   using screen talk.

I found it easy to voice type

I found it hard to polyline

I really enjoyed talking

Next time I need to add more color

should children wear a school uniform

Should children were a school uniform.

Opening statement i completely agree firstly  because to reparzite your school.

Secondly kids get bullied for mufti clothes.

Finally uniform looks tidier.

1 if like a car crash in you were in it people could ring your school and the school would come or ring the police or an ambulance.

2 if you were a superman t-shirt and your 9 your going to get bullied but if you wear your uniform you won’t get bullied because they know you are from awapuni.

3 uniform looks real tidy cause if you were muffy it doesn't look tidy but if you were your clean uniform!!

Closing statement i hope i have canvinstite you and i hope you wear  your uniform.